I have attend the language session this Wednesday. I ask Stephen(tutor) to correct my grammar mistakes. After this tutorial, I realise one mistake could change the meaning of the sentence. Following is the native English script.
INT. SOPHIA'S BEDROOM DAY
Words on invitation card:
My dear friend Sophia,
Our wedding will be held in 11th September 2014. We sould be
delighted if you could join us!
Ann & John.
Sophia holds the card. She scowls and looks to other side
thinking something.
EXT. TO INT. SKY TO BEDROOM DAY
Rumble
Visual effects: A flash of lightning hits Ann's head.(The
frame is from clouds dropping through the roof to her eyes.
Then the frame cuts to black.
ANN
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh
CU Side Face:She opens her eyes.
MS Front: She sits up in bed and pants for breath. Her hands
touch her face, nose, everything is fine. She calms down.
Bangbangbang...(Door knocking)
LOTTE
Ann.. Ann.. Are you ok?
Bangbangbang...(Door knocking)
LS:Ann puts on her slippers and goes to open the door. At
the same time, the camera focuses on the photo on the wall
that shows John kissed Ann's hand.
Ann opens the door, her hair is matted with sweat.
Ann looks at Lotte. Her mouth is moving, but Ann cannot hear
Lotte's voice, it is distorted.
Visual effects: An image appears in front of Lotte's heart.
The frame illustrates the breakfast on the table
Ann closes her eyes and shakes her head. When she opens her
eyes, the image is still there.
Lotte waves her hands in front of Ann's eyes. She is
wondering why Ann is not answering at all.
ANN
No...no...yeah... OK..OK.
Ann closes her door, she turns back and looks at the lens in
wide-eyed excitement.
Ann sent a text to John
Come to my house right now! I have
an important thing to tell you!
INT. KITCHEN DAY
Ann is having breakfast. Lotte is washing dishes.
Door bell rings
Lotte looks at Ann, and goes to open the door.(Lotte is in
an her nightdress)
John stands outside. Lotte is staring while whispering.
LOTTE
Why are you coming here?
ANN
Baby.
Ann stands far behind them.
Lotte turns back, face to Ann. They stand side by side.
Visual effects: John's heart shows Lotte is kissing his
face. And Lotte's heart illustrates John is kissing her
face.
Ann's eyes are dull.
JOHN
Baby..Ann..Ann...
Ann walks forward bumps into Lotte and John and runs away.
LOTTE
Ann.. Ann..
EXT. STREET DAY
Ann walks on the street. She wipes teardrops. She sends a
message to Sophia
Ann: Where are you?
Sophia: Home.
EXT. OUTSIDE SOPHIA'S FLAT AFTERNOON
Ring...(Door Bell)
Ann presses the bell button.
Sophia opens the door
Ann hugs Sophia and cries.
SOPHIA
What's wrong with you?
Sophia pats Ann's back. Then Sophia holds Ann by the
shoulders and looks her in the eyes
ANN
John is a liar.
Sophia's bows her head. Her left hand play with the handle
of door and constantly swirl it.
Visual effects: Sophia's heart shows she saw John and Lotte
arm in arm on the street.
Ann's eyes are frightened. She shakes her heads slowly,
while walking backwards and shouting:
Why don't you tell me the truth?!
She runs away.
EXT. STREET NIGHTFALL
Ann walks towards the shop windows and sees her reflection.
Visual effects: She can clearly see her heart broken into
pieces and being blown away by wind. she wipes her tear and
walks.
Ann stands on half way across the road, the traffic lights
turns red. Everyone brush against her, everyone's heart is
revealed. Everyone's voice is distorted. It is loud and
noisy. She cannot endure, she tips her head back and roars.
She roars. Her voice echoes through the night.(the frame
zooms out from her head backwards to sky).
End.
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