2014年3月1日星期六

Mind Reader (3rd draft)


          INT. BEDROOM DAY

         
                    Rumble

          Visual effects: A flash of lightening hits Ann's head.(The
          frame is from clouds dropping through the roof to her
          tonsil, it is vibrating)

                              ANN
                    Ah.....(Through out the hitting
                    process. It sounds more and more
                    closer.)

          She lays in her bed, screamed.

          She sits up in her bed and pant for breath. Her hands
          touches her face, nose, everything is fine. She calms down.
                    Bangbangbang...(Door knocking)

                              LOTTE
                    Ann.. Ann.. Are you ok?
                    Bangbangbang...

          Ann takes on her slipper and goes to open the door. At the
          same time, the camera focus on the photo on the wall that
          shows John kissed Ann's hand.

          Ann opends the door, her hair is sweated.

          Ann looks to Lotte. Her mouth is moving, but Ann can not
          hear Lotte's voice, it is distorted.

          Visual effects: A image appears in front of Lotte's heart.
          The frame illustrates the breakfast on the table

          Ann closes her eyes and shakes her head. When she opened her
          eyes, the image still there.

          Lotte put her hand on Ann's shoulder. She is wondering why
          Ann is not answering anything.

                              ANN
                    No...no...yeah... I will come soon.

          Ann closes her door, she turns back and look at the lens in
          wide-eyed excitement.

          Ann sent short message to John
                    Come to my house right now! I have
                    an important thing to tell you!

          INT. KITCHEN DAY

          Ann is having breakfast. Lotte is smoking.
                         Door bell rings

          Lotte looks at Ann, and goes to open the door.(Lotte is in
          an night braces skirt)

          John stands outside. Lotte is shocked while whispered

                              LOTTE
                    Why are you coming here?

                              ANN
                    Baby.

          Ann stand far behind them.

          Lotte turns back, face to Ann.

          Ann and John stand alongside.

          Visual effects: John's heart shows Lotte is kissing his
          face. And Lotte's heart illustrates John is kissing her
          face.

          Ann's eyes are dull.

                              JOHN
                    Baby...Ann...

          Ann walks forwards collide Lotte and John and runs away.

                              LOTTE
                    Ann.. Ann..

         

          EXT. STREET DAY

          Ann walks on the road. She pass by a show window
          carelessness.

          Visual effects: The show window reflects the blood drops
          from her heart. Suddenly, Sophia jumps out in the image and
          says
                    I'm always stay by your side.

          EXT. OUTSIDE SOPHIA'S FLAT AFTERNOON
                    Ring...

          Ann press the bell button.
                    A sound of something is knocked
                    over comes out.

          The door is open.

          Ann's eyedorps falls down.

          Sophia looks back over and over again. She is twisting the
          tail of her cloth between her fingers.

                              SOPHIA
                    W...what's wrong w..with you,
                    Ann?(Distorted)

          Ann wants to say something, but she sees Sophia's heart
          image she strangled her boyfriend and hide him behind the
          door which she looks over and over again.

          Ann use her hand covers her mouths, her eyes is frightening,
          she shakes her heads, walks backwards and runs away.

          EXT. STREET NIGHTFALL

          Ann walks towards the show windows again, it reflects
          herselves.    

          Visual effects: She can clearly see her heart broken into
          pieces and be blowed away by wind. she wipes her tear and
          walks.

          Ann stands on the center of crossroad, the trafic lights
          turns red. Everyone brush against her, everyone's heart is
          revealed. Everyone's voice is distorted. It is loud and
          noisy. She can not endure, she raised her head up towards
          the sky, she roars. The night was vibrated by her sound.(the
          frame is zoom out from her head backwards to sky).

          End.

         

         

         

                             

                             


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