2013年12月8日星期日

Story board 1st draft





This is my first time to draw a storyboard, it is based on the scripts I have wrote in previous journal. I have finished the beginning eight shot of my scripts. The left side is the film frame, and the right side is the detail of the pictures. The the black mark is the tutor's comment which shows many disadvantages in my storyboard, the first thing is the sound, I should write each frame one sound action. Second one is the transition between each frame is important to write. The location of the scene need to be mentioned at the beginning. I always ignore details of storyboard and scripts writing, because the pictures are shown in my mind, so that I regard some details unnecessarily. However, that is the big mistake I have made. Because Jools mentioned in my scripts commets that storyboard and scripts is for the production team looking for appropriate actors, and other cooperative partners, so I need to present everything the film to complete the storyboard and scripts. So in the second draft of my scripts and storyboard, I will pay more attention to the details of my work.

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