The difference between the 1st draft script and 4nd draft script

In the first draft I always want to use VFX to explain something. Because I want to make the film more Fairy Tale, even though the VFX is not necessary sometimes. Such as use a bulb above Ann's head to show her new idea. After tutorial, I realise it will make the film complicated. Because the VFX is not used for the plots development. It more likely use VFX for VFX. 

Therefore, I reduce much of VFX in my script. I only use VFX to illustrate Ann's heart reading and the zoom in from sky. I do not reduce this part is because I want to add some fantastic element in film. And I have changed the Sophia's part. I make this part more realistic rather than absurd. It is better for the story telling.

In conclusion, everything I make in the film is to make the film better. But the key is that the things I add in film is not the more the better. Sometimes, simple is a good way to show the atmosphere of film. And the story telling is a logical thing, everything I set in the film should work for tell the story.