2014年2月22日星期六
Mind Reader 2nd draft
Ann and Lotte are roommates. They live in the same house,
their lives are normal and plain. However, one day...
INT. BEDROOM DAY
Rumble
Visual effects: A flash of lightening hits Ann's head.(The
frame is from clouds dropping through the roof to her
tonsil, it is vibrating)
ANN
Ah.....(Through out the hitting
process. It sounds more and more
closer.)
She lays in her bed, screamed.
She sits up in her bed and pant for breath. Her hands
touches her face, nose, everything is fine. She calms down.
Bangbangbang...(Door knocking)
LOTTE
Ann.. Ann.. Are you ok?
Bangbangbang...
Ann take on her slipper and opens the door, her hair is
sweated.
Ann looks to Lotte. Her mouth is moving, but Ann can not
hear Lotte's voice, it is distorted.
Visual effects: A image appears in front of Lotte's heart.
The frame illustrates the breakfast is on the table, she
take on her shoes and go out.
Ann closes her eyes and shakes her head. When she opened her
eyes, the image still there.
Lotte stop talking and go away.
Ann turns back and look at the lens. She comes out an idea.
Visual effects: a bulb lights up above her head.
EXT.STRANGER'S HOUSE(ANN'S NEIGHBOUR)
Bangbangbang...(Door knocking)
Ann stands in front of a house. She looks up to it.
She knocks the door urgently, then hides behind a tree. She
pops out half of her head to see what is happening.
The stranger opens the door, but no one is outside. His face
is angry, and he is cursing,but his voice is still
distorted.
Ann is focus on his heart which shows the boiled water in
his kitchen. (Zoom in to Stranger's chest)
Ann smiled.
The stranger shuts the door.
Ann takes out her booklet, it is writen John's address. The
booklet also notes Sophia's address.
Visual effects: John's name is highlighting and a green tick
apears at the beginning of John's name. Ann's face is
brighten and golden.
EXT. OUTSIDE JOHN'S FLAT
Ann stands outside John's room. She takes a deep breath and
press the door bell.
RING...
Her heartbeat is faster and faster.
Visual effects: Her eyes are filled with hearts and lighted
up. The camera zoom into her eyes: John stands under the
spotlight, he hand a Rose forward(The camera is moving
around him 90° angle)
Sound of John opens the door
Ann's heartbeat sound suddenly stops. The camera moves
backwards to her face.
Visual effects: The hearts in her eyes disappeared, Her face
expression is severe. John's face is excited, but his heart
illustrates he opens the door, Lotte stand outside.
She turns to walk away, while Lotte is coming in.
Visual effects: Lotte's heart shows a soap bubble, a balloon
and a gum bubble blasts.
Lotte looks at Ann, she collides Lotte and runs away.
LOTTE
Ann.. Ann..
EXT. STREET DAY
Ann walks on the road.
Visual effects: The illustration of her heart shows the
blood drops from her heart.
She opened her booklet.
Visual effects: Sophia's name is highlight. And the blanket
of the rest of page shows Sophia's photo, she is speaking.
SOPHIA
I'm always stay by your side.
Ann close the booklet.
EXT. OUTSIDE SOPHIA'S FLAT AFTERNOON
Ring...
Ann press the bell button. Her make-up is messy.
Sophia opens the door. She smiles and stand aside to ask Ann
coming. Visual effects: Sophia's heart shows she laughs at
Ann.
Ann look at her left side, Sophia is stand there, and her
heart images is laughing.
Ann look to the other side, Sophia is also there.
She goes backwards and runs away.
EXT. STREET NIGHTFALL
Ann walks towards the show windows which reflects herselves.
Visual effects: She can clearly see her hearts broken into
pieces and blowed away by wind. she wipes her tear and walk
away.
Ann stands on the center of crossroad, the trafic lights
turns red. Everyone brush against her, everyone's heart is
revealed. Everyone's voice is distorted. It is loud and
noisy. She can not endure, she raised her head up towards
the sky, she roars. The night was vibrated by her sound.(the
frame is zoom out from her head backwards to sky).
End.
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